21. PRELIM - Ariadna Lenczewska Fatma Sadiq Durim Sllamniku Tanith Brad-Hinds from 283goswell on Vimeo.
Above is a clip of my preliminary and the final film opening, their is a clear difference. The mise en scene does not reflect the setting or characters at all and we had forgotten to use props. However in our opening we have used Islamic props such as the quran to indicate the film will be of Islamic content.
The mise en scene does not show where the setting is.
The shot of the quran straight away shows the content of our film.
Also the characters are wearing Islamic clothing to visually show they are Muslims. Whereas in the preliminary you cannot tell the actor is an immigration officer because of the clothes she is wearing (they do not really reflect an officer but more a teenagers outfit).
Immigration officer not suited to her chosen costume instead it would have been great if she wore a suit or any form of smart clothing.
Screenshot of the main characters wearing traditional Islamic clothing which further emphasizes the content of our film.
For the filming of our final opening we had used a full planned detail storyboard whereas during the prelim we lost our storyboard so we didn't really have any thing to follow through. Below is our storyboard from the planning of the final opening. We did a detail storyboard using different shots throughout .
This meant the shots did not match the next shot and we didn't use a range of different camera angles so the shots stayed similar throughout. However in our opening we felt the shots flows really well despite the fact it keep cross-cutting between two characters.
The image below is the shot which came after the image above. Both the images are two different subjects which do not flow after one another.
I personally believe this shot (360 degree) shown below was the best through-out our whole teen opening.
Moreover our editing for the prelim was quite simple as none of us was really aware on how to use final cut pro. We did not include any titles or sound and there was very little use of dialogue which meant the preliminary lack entertainment to the viewer.
Summary:
- I learnt researching is important while planning your product as for our preliminary I hardly done any research, just dived into it. However Most of our time for making the final opening was spent on research and planning so that's the reason why I believe their is a higher quality difference between the two.
- I also learn't the mise en scene is a big factor when filiming eventhough some may think it is small. I learnt it is key to get the small things right such as props and coustumes as they really bring out the characters personality.
- Finally I feel teamwork is very important. Through the prelim it was easy to work as a team as we new what we were doing and we were given the subject to base it on. Whereas during our film opening it was hard to work as a team as we all had very different ideas about what we wanted. This lead us to fall behind a great deal as we constantly changed the storyboard to try and fit everyones needs.
Below is a screenshot from an early blog post I had made listing the things I have learnt throughout the course and the planning and constructing of the product.